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Dreamersistan wrote:FAKE NEWS!
<The Alaskans perfect Phase 3 of HAARP and use its auspicious weather conditions to explore deeper on both fronts. Happy Americans across the divide and Russians join them quick, but Alaskans are selective in people to pick. Small military stations try to keep them at bay. At this point, the run-and-gun Alaskan Winter War tactics are so well developed, they don't stand a chance. Misdirection, distraction, guerrilla tactics, HAARP produced storms, paratrooping over points of convergence and multiple forces that break up and join together to force opponents against critical numbers force installation after installation to close.

<At a siberian station, the Alaskans find what they've been long looking for.>

<'Look, boys' says Councilman-now-General Atilla as his eyes are reflected in the sheen of the prized object. 'Rolex watches..'>

<They don't realize they're actually fake Molexes, but that's okay, let's stop this story short before he finds out and shoot some AA* bullets into the walls>

AA* Alaskan Armorers, now the premier elite weapons manufacturers in the world

Stunning. Really good!

Yep. I basically turned what people used to mock me for (the complicated backstory of Jack) and used it to make a very very cool introduction to my Creature of Karma and Retribution.

Danelaw Scandinavia wrote:Yep. I basically turned what people used to mock me for (the complicated backstory of Jack) and used it to make a very very cool introduction to my Creature of Karma and Retribution.

Can work on the language, make it tighter. But the idea and the 2 characters and their relationships is excellent. You used the mockery and the real pain of the character very well indeed. But if u write it better, it would pop so much more

Dreamersistan wrote:Can work on the language, make it tighter. But the idea and the 2 characters and their relationships is excellent. You used the mockery and the real pain of the character very well indeed. But if u write it better, it would pop so much more

Yeah and I will work on it. Today I did work on how to write better scenes and it worked for the most part.

Danelaw Scandinavia wrote:Yeah and I will work on it. Today I did work on how to write better scenes and it worked for the most part.

Good work. Get on discord if u want, and I'll break down ur post. Show u how to make it deeeee-licious

but give me 10 mins to finish up

Dreamersistan wrote:FAKE NEWS!
<The Alaskans perfect Phase 3 of HAARP and use its auspicious weather conditions to explore deeper on both fronts. Happy Americans across the divide and Russians join them quick, but Alaskans are selective in people to pick. Small military stations try to keep them at bay. At this point, the run-and-gun Alaskan Winter War tactics are so well developed, they don't stand a chance. Misdirection, distraction, guerrilla tactics, HAARP produced storms, paratrooping over points of convergence and multiple forces that break up and join together to force opponents against critical numbers force installation after installation to close.

<At a siberian station, the Alaskans find what they've been long looking for.>

<'Look, boys' says Councilman-now-General Atilla as his eyes are reflected in the sheen of the prized object. 'Rolex watches..'>

<They don't realize they're actually fake Molexes, but that's okay, let's stop this story short before he finds out and shoot some AA* bullets into the walls>

<They find huge vats of premier russian anabolics, metabolics and nootropics and begin taking them. Alaskans learn to channel it as a constant-indwelling IV that gives them momentary bursts of strength, mental acuity, enhanced agility and endurance.>

AA* Alaskan Armorers, now the premier elite weapons manufacturers in the world

Stunning. Really good!

"American forces gunned down a gang of raiders that were in control of Atlanta in Georgia and the city is currently in the process of being civilized"

Dreamersistan wrote:Good work. Get on discord if u want, and I'll break down ur post. Show u how to make it deeeee-licious

but give me 10 mins to finish up

I'm on Discord so why not.

Danelaw Scandinavia wrote:I'm on Discord so why not.

Yeah that’s my fault

Great Algerstonia wrote:Sorry m8, that whole thing was voided. That violates the rule of not being allowed to give someone land once they leave the map. So you can't take that land.

Says who? The original post said: “Our only hope is to join another Unistani nation. A powerful one. One in which our future will be assured. Thus, the Kingdom of Seleyth has proposed to the HUR a union.“

So on the map he will look like he is annexed but he will still control his territory. Trust me, we talked about it a lot.

The Holy Utopian Republic wrote:Says who? The original post said: “Our only hope is to join another Unistani nation. A powerful one. One in which our future will be assured. Thus, the Kingdom of Seleyth has proposed to the HUR a union.“

So on the map he will look like he is annexed but still controls his territory. We talked about it in TGs.

He didn't. Zukchiva did.

Terreich und Preussen wrote:He didn't. Zukchiva did.

I edited the post.

Remnant of America wrote:"American forces gunned down a gang of raiders that were in control of Atlanta in Georgia and the city is currently in the process of being civilized"

ArenaC wants to know if there’s anything they can do to help.

ArenaC wrote:Yeah that’s my fault

It's fine.

Remnant of America wrote:"American forces gunned down a gang of raiders that were in control of Atlanta in Georgia and the city is currently in the process of being civilized"

<Alaskan forces begin gathering Steam. People worship their leaders on both the North American main mainland, up into formerly US and Canadian territory. Their weather control improves by leaps and bounds, and now they can conjure thunderstorms, given appropriate meteorological situations to exploit. They pool medication, teach people the Alaskan way and start to reform a society. With family function, fun, games and a social life. People from as way East as Saskatchewan and Manitoba begin to migrate towards them.>

<The Alaskans exploring waterways come in contact with an aircarrier, out at sea, abandoned. The survivors among the sailors and pilots are nearby. They are rescued, and plans made to retake the carrier. The US navy is astonished by the power of HAARP.'>

'Well, Commander, says General Attila, 'I think the possession of this here carrier and you fine men might make us the strongest fighting force in the world again.'

'Sir', says Commander Ava Vintis, still looking at awe at the portable Wydrenclyffe 3.2b weather towers that created the storm that pushed the gigantic ship back into harbor, 'I think you had that title before you found us.'

<They begin building a dry dock and working on the broken ship. Work begins on new airforce strips, unconventional geological defenses and conventional fortifications. The Alaskan Survival retraining program is going better than imagined. But there is bad news at home>

<A message comes to them on the new communication wave technology Alaskans have perfected through the Ionosphere:

"It's the ex-gang members, sir! They're going nuts!">

<10% of the teams that went north and east return to deal with the menace. It's been a year since Alaska hasn't had gangs. They can't be allowed to spread again>

ArenaC wrote:ArenaC wants to know if there’s anything they can do to help.

The best you can do is stay out of it

Remnant of America I'll join the RP as Arizona but with Las Vegas too.

N-DAY FOUR!

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET

Stellar Colonies wrote:N-DAY FOUR!

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET

calm down

ArenaC wrote:calm down

Smashes through the RMB ceiling and yeets into the sky

Arizona and Las Vegas, Remnant of America Timeline

Phoenix and the multiple other cities in the area has clung onto survival.

Everyday hundreds starve, so they resolve to stealing.

But, Cowboys face them down face to face.

They fight for honor and the Cowboys carry justice.

Many of the Cowboys are actually funded by the Arizonan Government to fight these Criminals.

And so with the threat of The Remnant on the horizon, they must make a rash decision.

Will they fight or stay peaceful.

They must fight for honor and their reputation.

Stellar Colonies wrote:
Smashes through the RMB ceiling and yeets into the sky

or don’t

Danelaw Scandinavia wrote:Arizona and Las Vegas, Remnant of America Timeline

Phoenix and the multiple other cities in the area has clung onto survival.

Everyday hundreds starve, so they resolve to stealing.

But, Cowboys face them down face to face.

They fight for honor and the Cowboys carry justice.

Many of the Cowboys are actually funded by the Arizonan Government to fight these Criminals.

And so with the threat of The Remnant on the horizon, they must make a rash decision.

Will they fight or stay peaceful.

They must fight for honor and their reputation.

American forces advanced towards Las Vegas and Phoenix American forces recently ransacked area 51 taking all valuable technology there as well as other things

Dreamersistan wrote:

<Alaskan forces begin gathering Steam. People worship their leaders on both the North American main mainland, up into formerly US and Canadian territory. Their weather control improves by leaps and bounds, and now they can conjure thunderstorms, given appropriate meteorological situations to exploit. They pool medication, teach people the Alaskan way and start to reform a society. With family function, fun, games and a social life. People from as way East as Saskatchewan and Manitoba begin to migrate towards
them.>
<The Alaskans exploring waterways come in contact with an aircarrier, out at sea, abandoned. The survivors among the sailors and pilots are nearby. They are rescued, and plans made to retake the carrier. The US navy is astonished by the power of HAARP.'>

'Well, Commander, says General Attila, 'I think the possession of this here carrier and you fine men might make us the strongest fighting force in the world again.'

'Sir', says Commander Ava Vintis, still looking at awe at the portable Wydrenclyffe 3.2b weather towers that created the storm that pushed the gigantic ship back into harbor, 'I think you had that title before you found us.'

<They begin building a dry dock and working on the broken ship. Work begins on new airforce strips, unconventional geological defenses and conventional fortifications. The Alaskan Survival retraining program is going better than imagined. But there is bad news at home>

<A message comes to them on the new communication wave technology Alaskans have perfected through the Ionosphere:

"It's the ex-gang members, sir! They're going nuts!">

<10% of the teams that went north and east return to deal with the menace. It's been a year since Alaska hasn't had gangs. They can't be allowed to spread again>

<The Alaskan military enter quietly into their borders and use subtle weather cover tactics to sneak up on the gangs. They are surprised to find the camps fortified poorly. They realize why.. They know that HAARP will swamp their defenses, so they've chosen to go... underground>

<Realizing hostages have been taken and some of the city LE resources are under their control, teams break up. They can't use Alaskan Winter. The gangs have all grown up with the vaunted Survival retraining program.. They would expect a campaign of subterfuge and co-ordinated surprise skirmishes. They've clearly left the high ground, knowing it would be easy to target. The military needs to find a way to get inside the underground cave systems where Alaskan goods are stored, and access to the oil refineries is based>

<They camp out, wiping out tracks of their arrival. They wait.>

<No show for days. The military is puzzled. Then they realize...>

'What if they have access to the cameras, sir? What if they know we're here?'

Corporal Genghis grinds the tobacco pipe in his hand to dust. 'Crap. There goes that playbook. Hmm. Can we get in through the cave system?'

'Negative sir, too difficult to pass through. It's a natural defensive barricade.'

'Hmpf. Can we go thru.. the ice?'

'No way to do that without possible collapsing the roof on dozens of our own people, sir.'

'Well, HOW ABOUT A DIRECT ATTACK THEN?' Genghis yells.

<There is quiet in the room. The Alaskan wind can be heard blowing>

'Sir...'

Genghis sighs. 'I know, I know.. Sorry, I'm just... This wasn't supposed to happen! We spent so much time trying to fix em, re-integrate em.. We tried to bring em to society and this is how they pay us?'

Silence fills the room.

'Sorry, men. Just ranting, just ranting. Okay, let's take a break, chew some reindeer and reconvene at 5 O hu-'

'Sir, I have an idea.' It was Captain Gabriela Singh, a civilian recruit, formerly a marine engineer. 'Maybe there is a way..'

'Oh?' Genghis said and pulled some tobbaco-flavored breath thru his smashed pipe.

'We might be able to compress the ice around a central column, so it doesn't collapse when we melt sections with superconducted HAARP heat generation. We can hold it in place and-'

'Drill out a pathway, like scientists used to do with ice cores in Antarctica?'

She nodded. Genghis leaned forward.

'Can we really do that?'

Gabriela raised her eyes and shrugged. 'Theoretically.'

'Well then,' the Colonel's hand smashed down onto the makeshift table. 'Get to it, Captain.'

36 hours later, the gangs sleeping in their bunkers deep beneath the Alaskan ice were surprised by groups of soldiers bursting thru 200-metre thick ice on motorized ropes. The operation took 30 minutes and only 4 lives were lost.

'Hell of a job, Captain', Genghis said, shaking the woman by the hand. 'I guess I owe you a favor then.'

'You do, sir, and I plan to cash it. Right now.' Gabriella handed him a piece of paper.

Genghis glanced down and back up. He raised one eyebrow. 'Sub-Zeroers?'

'Yes, sir. That's what we want to call our new corps, able to conduct missions in extreme weather conditions through ice, snow and in the future, desert and even HAARP's generated conditions.'

Genghis smiled wryly and looked upon the survivors and happy families. 'Guess I can't refuse, Captain.'

Captain Singh smiled. 'Guess I made the right kind of offer, Sir.'

'Godfather fan, eh? You have guts, kid, I'll give you that.' Genghis put his arm around her shoulder and began regaling her with stories of his past days in the USA-of-yore.

And thus the Sub-Zeroer Corps was born

Remnant of America wrote:American forces advanced towards Las Vegas and Phoenix American forces recently ransacked area 51 taking all valuable technology there as well as other things

(The what? That is what we would do if you declared war on us. Allow me To RP before you coming in.)

Danelaw Scandinavia wrote:(The what? That is what we would do if you declared war on us. Allow me To RP before you coming in.)

Basically we don't know you exist yet

Remnant of America wrote:Basically we don't know you exist yet

Yes.

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