The Pacific Board

The Defender of Yatoism of Neuer Deutsches Reich

Neuer Deutsches Reich wrote:

Neuer Deutsches Reich is ranked 604th in the world and 16th in the Pacific for Most Advanced Defense Forces, scoring 35,813.65 on the Total War Preparedness Rating.

Shinobi state? what happened to you while I was gone?

Wubdich wrote:

Are you 'Bunniez' on Discord?
If yes, I thought you already joined it.

Good that we understand each other.

Ballistikov doesnt appreciate it when small rodents challenge us behind our backs.

Bunnies and Wubdich

Ballistikov wrote:

Shinobi state? what happened to you while I was gone?
Ballistikov doesnt appreciate it when small rodents challenge us behind our backs.

Dattebayo

Neuer Deutsches Reich wrote:

Dattebayo

What does that even mean?

Bunnies

Wubdich wrote:

Are you 'Bunniez' on Discord?
If yes, I thought you already joined it.

Uhm, nope. I used to have a discord thingy but I abandoned that once I realized I didn’t like my phone binging every few seconds to an unmanageable flood of notifications. I can hardly keep up with my personal email tbh.

So, in short, if anyone claims to be the real Bunnies on discord they’re a lying fraud.

The Municipalities of Antarctica and Wubdich

The ᛒᛁᚱᛋᛁᚱᚴᛦ of Wubdich

Ballistikov wrote:

What does that even mean?

For once, I have to say myself. I don't know either.

Bunnies wrote:

Uhm, nope. I used to have a discord thingy but I abandoned that once I realized I didn’t like my phone binging every few seconds to an unmanageable flood of notifications. I can hardly keep up with my personal email tbh.

So, in short, if anyone claims to be the real Bunnies on discord they’re a lying fraud.

Hmm, okay.
Noted.

Strala and Bunnies

Velvets realm

The Stalwart Federation of The Municipalities of Antarctica

Bunnies wrote:

I know you aren’t asking me but that hasn’t stopped me before!

It’s very good! It has a nice tonal-voice of outrage that easily puts the reader in place of the narrator while also giving them an ability to latch onto the “devil may care” themings of Levi’s life.
The one thing that I will critiques is the pacing. It’s sorta, well to me at least, not very engaging. Like the first half is what I’d call “listicals” where it’s more like that writing brainstorm practice thing where you select a character/thing/place and start listing out words and events to describe them in increasing order.

If I were to put it another way, it’s like perspective in drawings. Just because something can be in frame doesn’t mean it’ll interact or flow well with the other things. So instead of having all Levi’s attributes you might want to instead show a few attributes and expand on them, or interlace many attributes so they compound and interact one after another.
I fell as though the ending had a better pacing than the beginning.

Idk though, that might just be my personal taste.

Ah, as for the story's pacing thats probably cause I am far more used to writing wikipedia style factbooks about people and weapons in a bigger picture. Merely using as them sets to full-fill purpose rather than delving too much into their very specific quirks or functions.

Strala, Bunnies, The Municipalities of Antarctica, and Wubdich

Velvets realm wrote:

Ah, as for the story's pacing thats probably cause I am far more used to writing wikipedia style factbooks about people and weapons in a bigger picture. Merely using as them sets to full-fill purpose rather than delving too much into their very specific quirks or functions.

Quite different from me. I'm used to the opposite, I write stories and character dialogue a lot more.
If you'd like assistance, whilst I can't help you directly I wouldn't mind if you look at my archived RP posts for reference. Archives that I'll constantly be expanding.

Bunnies, Wubdich, and Velvets realm

Bunnies wrote:

Uhm, nope. I used to have a discord thingy but I abandoned that once I realized I didn’t like my phone binging every few seconds to an unmanageable flood of notifications. I can hardly keep up with my personal email tbh.

So, in short, if anyone claims to be the real Bunnies on discord they’re a lying fraud.

This gives Ballistikov an idea, grabs bunny ears and tail

Bunnies

The ᛒᛁᚱᛋᛁᚱᚴᛦ of Wubdich

Velvets realm wrote:

Ah, as for the story's pacing thats probably cause I am far more used to writing wikipedia style factbooks about people and weapons in a bigger picture. Merely using as them sets to full-fill purpose rather than delving too much into their very specific quirks or functions.

The Municipalities of Antarctica wrote:

Quite different from me. I'm used to the opposite, I write stories and character dialogue a lot more.
If you'd like assistance, whilst I can't help you directly I wouldn't mind if you look at my archived RP posts for reference. Archives that I'll constantly be expanding.

Me, on the other other hand, is used to writing either highly scientific articles or far too detailed actions of characters, while character interaction seems like a complete, unrealistic, robotic mess.
So, I'd stand ready for the two points mentioned.

Bunnies and Velvets realm

Bunnies

The Municipalities of Antarctica

Edited

Ballistikov wrote:

This gives Ballistikov an idea, grabs bunny ears and tail

I always loved those cute little bunny ear headbands! But I’m way too scared to wear them in public because I’d be worried about what other people would think, but I’m sure they’d look very cute on you!
It is a bit too soon for Easter though

The ᛒᛁᚱᛋᛁᚱᚴᛦ of Wubdich

Bunnies wrote:

I always loved those cute little bunny ear headbands! But I’m way too scared to wear them in public because I’d be worried about what other people would think, but I’m sure they’d look very cute on you!
It is a bit too soon for Easter though

So you are not a bunny in front of a computer?
Kathol will be shaken

Bunnies

The Defender of Yatoism of Neuer Deutsches Reich

Edited

Bunnies wrote:

I always loved those cute little bunny ear headbands! I’ve always been too scared to wear them in public though because I’d be worried about what other people think, but I’m sure they’d look very cute on you!
It is a bit too soon for Easter though

....That's not what I meant.... The plan was I pretend to be you and destroy Ballistikovs enemies (You) reputation while boosting our own!
Also Ballistikov is not cute!

Bunnies

Ballistikov wrote:

What does that even mean?

. . .
Nani? Dattebayo, NANI?!?

Strala

Neuer Deutsches Reich wrote:

. . .
Nani? Dattebayo, NANI?!?

I guess this means im more German than the fatherland itself.

Bunnies

Wubdich wrote:

So you are not a bunny in front of a computer?
Kathol will be shaken

Haha! It was a trick!
*pulls off the Bunny finger puppet I’ve been wearing all along*
There was always a reason you couldn’t put a finger on me? You couldn’t...hm. There’s a pun here somewhere. Oh! Can someone give me a hand with the pun?
(I honestly didn’t really know what Balli was trying to do? Like, was he trying to grab me the perso—er Bunny behind the computer, and how would that work? Or was he trying to grab Nara the Bunny I assigned to RMBia? I was so confused!)

Ballistikov wrote:

....That's not what I meant.... The plan was I pretend to be you and destroy Ballistikovs enemies (You) reputation while boosting our own!
Also Ballistikov is not cute!

But if you pretend to be me you’re going to have to be cute? I thought that’s why you were trying to put on rabbit ears...

Jar Wattinree, Strala, Kathol rift, Ballistikov, and 2 othersThe Municipalities of Antarctica, and Wubdich

Bunnies wrote:

Haha! It was a trick!
*pulls off the Bunny finger puppet I’ve been wearing all along*
There was always a reason you couldn’t put a finger on me? You couldn’t...hm. There’s a pun here somewhere. Oh! Can someone give me a hand with the pun?
(I honestly didn’t really know what Balli was trying to do? Like, was he trying to grab me the perso—er Bunny behind the computer, and how would that work? Or was he trying to grab Nara the Bunny I assigned to RMBia? I was so confused!)But if you pretend to be me you’re going to have to be cute? I thought that’s why you were trying to put on rabbit ears...

...... *Puts on Bunny ears and looks in the mirror, ........... Ballistikov is gonna have to discuss things internally.....

Jar Wattinree, Strala, Airengard, Kathol rift, and 4 othersBunnies, The Municipalities of Antarctica, Wubdich, and Atlantic artic

The shigu

hmmm

Bunnies

The shigu wrote:

hmmm

Its not what it looks like........

Bunnies

The shigu

The Stalwart Federation of The Municipalities of Antarctica

Edited

Ballistikov wrote:

Its not what it looks like........

Ehh I don't care much anyway. imma go back to working on the DLCs for BattleFur 4

Ballistikov wrote:

Its not what it looks like........

Ballistikov, I didn't know you liked to put on bunny ears.

Bunnies and Wubdich

The Municipalities of Antarctica wrote:

Ballistikov, I didn't know you liked to put on bunny ears.

No we dont like to!
Ballistikov is big stronk and Very Manly Nation!

Bunnies and The Municipalities of Antarctica

The shigu

The United Provinces of Cisplatinaa

Franchise: BattleFur
Engine: Stalker 5 (8k Graphics)
Genre: First Person Shooter
Rating: M
Price: $75
Description: Taking place months after the events of BattleFur 3, the US Federal Government and the Russian Government intervenes and plans to take on the two forces. Now banded together to face the superpowers, all-out war rages between the Internet Coalition and the Federal Alliance. Experience dynamic 50 vs 50 combat as you fight through the cities of New York City, Miami, Washington D.C, Honolulu, and Wake Island.

DLCs:

Rebellion: Fight through the cities of Philadelphia and Charlotte as you fight as the new Resistance faction against their occupiers. Experience a modern-day D-Day as you mow down federal forces in the new Omaha Beach map and parachute into the City of Paris. Mutilate your enemies with three brand new weapons and experience the new gore mechanic to add a little brutality to your melee kills.

Black Gold: Gun down US Soldiers in the new Jerusalem map and trigger its three levolutions. New maps include the city of Mosul, and Mecca. Arm yourself with five new weapons and expand your customization with new helmets and camos. Experience new weather conditions such as sandstorms as you plow through the Middle East.

Jar Wattinree and Bunnies

The shigu wrote:

Franchise: BattleFur
Engine: Stalker 5 (8k Graphics)
Genre: First Person Shooter
Rating: M
Price: $75
Description: Taking place months after the events of BattleFur 3, the US Federal Government and the Russian Government intervenes and plans to take on the two forces. Now banded together to face the superpowers, all-out war rages between the Internet Coalition and the Federal Alliance. Experience dynamic 50 vs 50 combat as you fight through the cities of New York City, Miami, Washington D.C, Honolulu, and Wake Island.

DLCs:

Rebellion: Fight through the cities of Philadelphia and Charlotte as you fight as the new Resistance faction against their occupiers. Experience a modern-day D-Day as you mow down federal forces in the new Omaha Beach map and parachute into the City of Paris. Mutilate your enemies with three brand new weapons and experience the new gore mechanic to add a little brutality to your melee kills.

Black Gold: Gun down US Soldiers in the new Jerusalem map and trigger its three levolutions. New maps include the city of Mosul, and Mecca. Arm yourself with five new weapons and expand your customization with new helmets and camos. Experience new weather conditions such as sandstorms as you plow through the Middle East.

Is that use of your game companies ??

The shigu