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Haviluthen wrote:Hm, could work. I should probably make a character introduction though.

A Character Introduction for your Leader. Let the Introduction be a Rap.

Seleyth wrote:Lol I'm just gonna crusade the living Jesus out of all non-arabian Unistanis and have a La Terra feud with La Xinga involving more guns than the Steve Harvey version.

Very well, i shall meet you on the battlefield if you wish to attack all of the various non-arabian Unistanis.

La Xinga and Seleyth

Volinovia wrote:Drawing for World Cup

Group A
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Lerasi
Danelaw
Karatol-Adverna
Chile-Paraguay

Group B
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Osterriech und Ungarn
Terriech und Preussen
ImperFuedal
Zukchiva

Group C
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Onofria
New Union of Soviet Socialist Republics
Kampf Empire
Kilkire

Group D
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Rode Unie
Mangre
Eastern Kaiserreich
Grand Petaria

Welcome to your World Cup news center! We are here to fill your heads full of news before the next World Cup starting October 11th! Well, the first thing we would like to talk about is a very controversial Group C, heck just look up the makeup of the group. Kampf Empire, Kilkire, and New union of sovereign soviet republics this group is definitely one to watch as each team here is going to try to knock their rivals down. In other news the projected teams to watch are Mangre, Danelaw Scandinavia, Kilkire, and Lerasi. These teams have a lot to prove going in. Mangre is trying to hold onto their spot as the best team in the league while Danelaw wants revenge from last month. Kilkire is projected to come out on top of Group 3 but it will not be easy, and of course, the host nation Lerasi has a lot to prove because they do not want to look bad in front of their people. The theme for this World Cup will be Haloween, and the Fanzones will be living it up as Orange and Black will represent the vibrant stadiums of Lerasi. The pressure is on Lerasi to now pick a mascot and get everything ready for Lerasi OCT2019!

Volinovia wrote:Welcome to your World Cup news center! We are here to fill your heads full of news before the next World Cup starting October 11th! Well, the first thing we would like to talk about is a very controversial Group C, heck just look up the makeup of the group. Kampf Empire, Kilkire, and New union of sovereign soviet republics this group is definitely one to watch as each team here is going to try to knock their rivals down. In other news the projected teams to watch are Mangre, Danelaw Scandinavia, Kilkire, and Lerasi. These teams have a lot to prove going in. Mangre is trying to hold onto their spot as the best team in the league while Danelaw wants revenge from last month. Kilkire is projected to come out on top of Group 3 but it will not be easy, and of course, the host nation Lerasi has a lot to prove because they do not want to look bad in front of their people. The theme for this World Cup will be Haloween, and the Fanzones will be living it up as Orange and Black will represent the vibrant stadiums of Lerasi. The pressure is on Lerasi to now pick a mascot and get everything ready for Lerasi OCT2019!

Note that now we may need to add some more skilled things to the generator.

Osterreich und ungarn

Restoration of Eastern Kaiserreich wrote:Very well, i shall meet you on the battlefield if you wish to attack all of the various non-arabian Unistanis.

Is someone threatening you?

Shavara, Restoration of Eastern Kaiserreich, Brethren, and The united neo american union

Volinovia wrote:The pressure is on Lerasi to now pick a mascot and get everything ready for Lerasi OCT2019!

Mascot question mark?

Osterreich und ungarn wrote:Is someone threatening you?

Might be threatening all non-Arabaisn Unistanis. But we'll need to see if they'll actually do anything.

Brethren, The united neo american union, and Lerasi

Lerasi wrote:Mascot question mark?

Yeah, Russia 2018s was a Wolf named Zabivaka! Google a picture I am sure with Haloween as your theme you can find plenty.

Restoration of Eastern Kaiserreich wrote:Might be threatening all non-Arabaisn Unistanis. But we'll need to see if they'll actually do anything.

Protective dragon noises

Restoration of Eastern Kaiserreich wrote:Very well, i shall meet you on the battlefield if you wish to attack all of the various non-arabian Unistanis.

Perhaps. I'm starting with the north.

Osterreich und ungarn

Restoration of Eastern Kaiserreich wrote:Might be threatening all non-Arabaisn Unistanis. But we'll need to see if they'll actually do anything.

That strangely puts the Riskari peoples of Arklen and Leopolds Land under that threat, who are natives of Unistan.

Zukchi wrote:Hm, makes sense.

Idk if I'll ever do it, but I'll try putting more effort into my posts. I think that, if I try to think more on my sentences and posts before I post, it wouldn't be even a half-fix but it would be a step in the right direction.

Shut up and do as I say, and it'll be better than ur tiny brain can imagine.

I already taught u every single plot in existence. Plot is miniscule. Plot really doesn't matter.

Well, it does to YOU because u dont have em down by heart. But to a 30 year old writer, aint nothing interesting about plot.

It's all about character and narrative flow.

Writing character takes a long time to learn because, well, most good chars are based off real life so u'll actually have to go out and experience life. U dont have that luxury now.

Plot comes thru reading lots of books and watching lots of stories. Also, if ure ever friends with 2 or 3 bullsh***ers, the ones who perpetually lie and self-aggrandize, u'll learn TONS about plot. those guys are masters, even if they dont realize.

Your tiny 14 year old brain can learn 2 things, rn. How to write good fast flowing narrative, how to have a rich vocabulary with lots of specific and emotive words and phrases, how to use all the plots that have been used a gazillion times before, how to create ur own style.

Style is simply the mistakes or the changes we make from the dry norm of the language. It's like Michael Jordan doing things normal people want to do. But it's also Brian Scalabrine doing idiotic things no one wants to do. Anything that deviates from the average baseline is your style, and it'll come. You really don't have to push it. Look at my writing. People say my style is writing (ahem) <bunch of positive adjectives related to cleverness and flourish/collection of negative adjectives related to arrogance, snobbery and me generally being a ****>. Yet I never consciously thought about my style. I did always work on getting more vocabulary, using dialogue, using turns of phrase, literary techniques, symbols, motifs, etc. And all that has kinda morphed itself over 20 years into style.

You'll get better writing character, if you just observe life, talk to people, ask people question, are generally curious about people, why they do what they do. Heck, I'm a character that's been used umpteen times in all kinds of media. Short stories, novels, youtube videos. Lerasi unashamedly mimicks me live on RMB : )

So u'll get better with characters later in ur life. You'll get style with practice. The things u can really develop are plot and quality of language, perfection of grammar, flow of narrative, pace, turns of phrase, idioms, word choice, the poetic flourish of your writing.

If u just look back thru this post I wrote, none of which I've edited, you can find everything I told you about. There is a plot and structure to this very informal off-the-cuff non-fiction piece of english literature. You just need to practice and to listen to those who've done it before you. Like I did. It'll all come together. All of you that spend so much time here should have at least a book to ur name by the time you're 25.

Otherwise what the hell are u people doing here? : )

If Al can write, so can you

My economy's fragile, what do?

I am going to sleep.

General geoland

(06V) Biofrost strengthens into Category 2 hurricane...

Volinovia wrote:Yeah, Russia 2018s was a Wolf named Zabivaka! Google a picture I am sure with Haloween as your theme you can find plenty.

Rah is an orange dragon with orange eyes and black rings of scales around the eyes. I made him last December w/o knowing how Halloweenish he was.

Lerasi wrote:Rah is an orange dragon with orange eyes and black rings of scales around the eyes. I made him last December w/o knowing how Halloweenish he was.

o<o You should make him a character in your Nation and have him meet Snow.

Restoration of Eastern Kaiserreich wrote:o<o You should make him a character in your Nation and have him meet Snow.

Indeed, but not right now because I just got an explosion of ideas.

Volinovia wrote:Welcome to your World Cup news center! We are here to fill your heads full of news before the next World Cup starting October 11th! Well, the first thing we would like to talk about is a very controversial Group C, heck just look up the makeup of the group. Kampf Empire, Kilkire, and New union of sovereign soviet republics this group is definitely one to watch as each team here is going to try to knock their rivals down. In other news the projected teams to watch are Mangre, Danelaw Scandinavia, Kilkire, and Lerasi. These teams have a lot to prove going in. Mangre is trying to hold onto their spot as the best team in the league while Danelaw wants revenge from last month. Kilkire is projected to come out on top of Group 3 but it will not be easy, and of course, the host nation Lerasi has a lot to prove because they do not want to look bad in front of their people. The theme for this World Cup will be Haloween, and the Fanzones will be living it up as Orange and Black will represent the vibrant stadiums of Lerasi. The pressure is on Lerasi to now pick a mascot and get everything ready for Lerasi OCT2019!

The Scandinavian Team is trained and has a fiery spirit of Vengeance to win the Cup and keep the Highest Record in the EPSA.

Kilkire, Volinovia, and Lerasi

Lerasi wrote:Rah is an orange dragon with orange eyes and black rings of scales around the eyes. I made him last December w/o knowing how Halloweenish he was.

But... what miracle of sad evolution would create a noticeable bright orange reptile?

Lerasi wrote:Rah is an orange dragon with orange eyes and black rings of scales around the eyes. I made him last December w/o knowing how Halloweenish he was.

Done.

Euricanis wrote:But... what miracle of sad evolution would create a noticeable bright orange reptile?

Corn snake. Rat snake. IIRC some morphs of garter snake.

Euricanis wrote:But... what miracle of sad evolution would create a noticeable bright orange reptile?

It's a warning...

Brethren wrote:Corn snake. Rat snake. IIRC some morphs of garter snake.

No one expects the Orange Inquisition!

Lerasi wrote:It's a warning...

A warning so that the dragon’s prey can run away and not die?

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