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Dreamersistan wrote:Promising.. very promising. But you really should have improved ur language after a year. It still reads like it used to last year. Look how much Shav OU and the gang have improved. You gotta write more

Nuuu im tu laziiiiii

In all honesty, I may not be able to improve it much but I could do a bit better. But my eyes are a bit on fire for being on the laptop too long, and the map sucked out my soul.

Dreamersistan, Brethren, Lerasi, and Haviluthen

Haviluthen wrote:I want to write an rp for this Nation but haven't come up with anything...

Hmm. War between Faiths.

Haviluthen

Chile-paraguay

The ISI has begun handpicking new workers for the different divisions within the Institute.

Shavara and Lerasi

Greater felter

I wanna get 10% in Zodiac in Geometry Dash.

Noms on dinner

Great algerstonia wrote:Another one bites the dust...

Dust: Ow! Alger bit me! Algerrr ;-;

Alger: WwwwwwwwwwRRRRRRRrrrrrrrrrrwww

<time passes and alger tries to hit dust with his head>

Dust: mmmm Alger bit me... And that REALLY hurt, Alger because I wa-

Alger: <smiling at the camera squakes>: Aaaack

Video goes viral

Brethren, Great algerstonia, Lerasi, and Zukchi

Danelaw Scandinavia wrote:Hmm. War between Faiths.

Nah, there's still a lot to establish with this Nation before it goes to war for the first time.

Zukchiva wrote:Nuuu im tu laziiiiii

In all honesty, I may not be able to improve it much but I could do a bit better. But my eyes are a bit on fire for being on the laptop too long, and the map sucked out my soul.

Honestly me, you need to do better. It's pathetic.

Dreamersistan, Lerasi, and Haviluthen

Chile-paraguay

The Institute's first experimentation with some Valsoran species has finished. It is up to the Directory to keep testing sooner.

Lerasi, Haviluthen, and Zukchi

Zukchi wrote:Honestly me, you need to do better. It's pathetic.

I agree with both of u, schizophrenic mapmaker

Dreamersistan wrote:I agree with both of u, schizophrenic mapmaker

But you should agree with me! I meant, me! Not him me, me me!

Brethren, Lerasi, and Haviluthen

Zukchi wrote:But you should agree with me! I meant, me! Not him me, me me!

<murders one/both of u because i like peace and quiet>

Practice writing more. It's ur word choice, ur phrase choice, that needs to morph

Brethren, Lerasi, Haviluthen, General geoland, and 1 otherZukchi

Dreamersistan wrote:<murders one/both of u because i like peace and quiet>

Practice writing more. It's ur word choice, ur phrase choice, that needs to morph

That's the biggest main issue?

How would I fix that?

Dreamersistan, Brethren, Lerasi, and Haviluthen

Zukchi wrote:That's the biggest main issue?

How would I fix that?

Read more grown up books or watch lots of good movies or read good dialogue. But mostly, read books and observe how they use sentence structure, word choice, etc. Just go back and look at my posts, if u like. The way I structure sentences so they're

A.ccurate
B.rief
C.lear
D.escriptive
E.motional

Danelaw Scandinavia, Lerasi, Haviluthen, General geoland, and 1 otherZukchi

Dreamersistan wrote:Read more grown up books or watch lots of good movies or read good dialogue. But mostly, read books and observe how they use sentence structure, word choice, etc. Just go back and look at my posts, if u like. The way I structure sentences so they're

A.ccurate
B.rief
C.lear
D.escriptive
E.motional

Hm, makes sense.

Idk if I'll ever do it, but I'll try putting more effort into my posts. I think that, if I try to think more on my sentences and posts before I post, it wouldn't be even a half-fix but it would be a step in the right direction.

Volinovia wrote:Drawing for World Cup

Group A
-
Lerasi
Danelaw
Karatol-Adverna
Chile-Paraguay

Group B
-
Osterriech und Ungarn
Terriech und Preussen
ImperFuedal
Zukchiva

Group C
-
Onofria
New Union of Soviet Socialist Republics
Kampf Empire
Kilkire

Group D
-
Rode Unie
Mangre
Eastern Kaiserreich
Grand Petaria

Danelaw, you're on!

Kampf Empire wrote:If you use your imagination, a high blood alcohol level, and the tune from "Prince Ali", you could make this sound like a lullaby.

Hmm. That does work!

Great algerstonia wrote:*swims because I like to swim*

*quotes because I like to quote*

Dreamersistan wrote:Read more grown up books or watch lots of good movies or read good dialogue. But mostly, read books and observe how they use sentence structure, word choice, etc. Just go back and look at my posts, if u like. The way I structure sentences so they're

A.ccurate
B.rief
C.lear
D.escriptive
E.motional

Excuse me but where the fvcking hell has this been literally all my life?

Volinovia, Great algerstonia, Haviluthen, and Zukchi

Haviluthen wrote:Nah, there's still a lot to establish with this Nation before it goes to war for the first time.

....Politics and Stock Market.

Lerasi and Haviluthen

That stuff being said, this is my nation for Plaz's rp. Don't know how far I'll go into this, but it's here!

Shavara and Lerasi

Zukchi wrote:That stuff being said, this is my nation for Plaz's rp. Don't know how far I'll go into this, but it's here!

souf afrika

Danelaw Scandinavia wrote:....Politics and Stock Market.

Hm, could work. I should probably make a character introduction though.

Haviluthen wrote:Nah, there's still a lot to establish with this Nation before it goes to war for the first time.

Lol I'm just gonna crusade the living Jesus out of all non-arabian Unistanis and have a La Terra feud with La Xinga involving more guns than the Steve Harvey version.

La Xinga and Haviluthen

Dreamersistan wrote:Read more grown up books or watch lots of good movies or read good dialogue. But mostly, read books and observe how they use sentence structure, word choice, etc. Just go back and look at my posts, if u like. The way I structure sentences so they're

A.ccurate
B.rief
C.lear
D.escriptive
E.motional

Yes. Dream made me do that while he helped me and I improved.

Post self-deleted by Danelaw Scandinavia.

Zukchi wrote:That stuff being said, this is my nation for Plaz's rp. Don't know how far I'll go into this, but it's here!

I use Aivintis.

Danelaw Scandinavia wrote:Yes. Dream made me do that while he helped me and I improved.

HOW COME EVERYONE KNOWS THIS BUT ME?!?!

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